Writing a Blog
It was a rainy day. I felt something odd about the sound. The sound of rain in Korea might be different from that in the Netherlands. I wrote a blog article about a Korean bar. I was really into it. I visited a Korean bar and had grilled mackerel. The bar owner was a nice guy. He spoke to me in Korean even though I could not understand what he was saying. While having dinner, I kept thinking about how to improve the blog article. I edited some sentences on my mobile phone. After I came back to the hotel, I had a can of Guinness. I made a few adjustments to a Python program. I soaked in hot water and then went to bed around 11 pm.
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- Writign A Blog It was a rainy day. I felt strange that sound. Korean rainy sound might differ from The Netherlands. I wrote a blog article about a Korean bar. I really into about it. I visited a korean bar. I had grilled mackerel. The bar owner was a nice guy. He talked me Korean language even though I could not understand what he says. During having dinner, I was still continued how to improve the blog article. I edited some sentences with mobile phone. After came back the hotel, I had canned Guiness beer. I adjusted Python program a bit. I soaked hot water and then I went to bed around 11 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
