Visiting Zaandam
We set off to go to Zaandam at 1pm in Jan’s car. We picked up Janin at her working place which is a nursing home. There is a tourist area which was then packed with tourists. We entered the inside of the windmills and watched a video giving explanations about them. I was able to understand how to work windmills. Janin told me a lot of funny stories at her working place about elderly people’s behavior. We came back home before 5pm. I had discounted packed Asian food, grilled sausage, mushrooms, and egg. My parents are considering to visit the Netherlands. They want to find cheap hotels, but there aren’t any like those in Japan. I fell asleep around 11pm.
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- Visiting Zaandam We set off to go Zaandam at 1pm by Jan's car. We picked up Janin at her working place of nursing home. There is a tourist area then packed with tourists. We entered inside of windmills and watched the video of explanations about them. I was able to understand how to work windmills. Janin told me a lot of funny stories at her working place elder people's behavior. We came back home before 5pm. I had discounted packed Asian food, grilled sausage, mushrooms, and egg. My parents is considering to visit The Netherlands. They want find cheap hotels but nothing such hotel like Japan. I fell asleep around 11pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.