
Janin’s Birthday
It was cloudy. I did my daily routines, including my art project. Around 3pm, I went to the supermarket to get a small gift for Janin. I bought a bouquet of tulips, watermelon, and a box of ice cream. She said, “I got it last month, too. Thank you”. Actually, I gave a bouquet to her a bouquet last month as well, but I mistook that day for her birthday. Her birthday was yesterday. I went to the bar Johnny. There were arrivals of new beers. I tried them. In the end, I had 3 glasses of beer. I cooked grilled salmon with mussels and shrimp, and ramen noodles for dinner. I fell asleep before 9pm.
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- Janin's Birthday It was cloudy. I did daily routines including art project. Around 3pm, I went to the supermarket to get a small gift for Janin. I had a tulip bouquet, watermelon, and a box of ice cream. She said "I got it last month, too. Thank you". Actually, I gave a bouquet to her last month also but it was my mistaken for her birthday. Yesterday is the correct her birthday. I went to the bar Johnny. There were arrivals of new beers. I tried them. In the end, I had 3 glasses of beer. I cooked grilled salmon with mussels and shrimp, and ramen noodles for dinner. I fell asleep before 9pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.