No Mobile Phone Time

I got out of bed just after noon. I didn’t have much energy, but I completed my daily routines. In the evening, I went to pick up my clothes from the dry cleaner. It was cloudy, so I brought a folding umbrella. I visited a rooftop bar for the third time. Since I didn’t have my mobile phone, I was able to concentrate on my thoughts. It was my first time going out without a mobile phone in Vietnam. I had three bottles of beer. I then went to a local restaurant that I had visited the previous day. The staff member remembered me. I had deep-fried tofu. I stopped by a Ministop and got oden and a type of chimaki (a cake wrapped in bamboo leaves). The taste of the oden was quite different from the Japanese style. I fell asleep around 11 pm.

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No Mobile Phone Time I went out of my bed just after noon. I did not have any energy but I did my daily routines. In the evening, I went to receive my cloths to a dry cleaner. It was a cloudy so I brought a folding umbrella. I visited a rooftop bar. It was the third time visiting there. I did not have mobile phone so I was able to concentrate on my thought. It was the first time to go out with no mobile phone in Vietnam. I had three bottles of beer. I went to a local restaurant which I visited the previous day, too. The shop staff member remembered me. I had stir-fried tofu. I stopped by a Ministop. I got oden and kind of chimaki (a cake wrapped in bamboo leaves). The oden taste is quite different from Japanese style one. I fell asleep around 11pm.
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