My Sister’s Visit
I went to the cafe Yamaneko to read a book. The cafe owner mentioned my new blog article. He said, “You have good writing skills.” I stopped by an electric shop and then visited the bar Sanaya. I asked if they allowed one more person to join the piano concert. She accepted my request. While we were talking, two unpleasant customers came in. After they left, she said that if those customers ever came back, she would not let them in. I returned home around 7 pm, but my sister was not there yet. While waiting for my sister’s family, I lost my temper at my father’s rude words to my mother. I said, “You should die!” I really hate him. Around 8 pm, my sister’s family finally arrived. We talked about various things together. I fell asleep just after 11 pm without taking a shower.
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The original text before the correction
- My Sister Came I went to the cafe Yamaneko to read book. The cafe owner mentioned me about my new blog article. He said you have a good writing skill. I stopped by an electic shop and then I visited the bar Sanaya. I asked if they allowed to join the concert another person. She accepted my offer. When I was talking, two unpleasant customers came in. After leaving them, she said if the cusotomers came, I would dinied to enter. I returned my home around 7 pm but my sister was not there yet. During waiting for my sister family, I tempered my father's rude words to my mother. I said "You should die!". I really hate him. Around 8 pm, finally my sister's family came. We talked various things together. I fell asleep just after 11 pm without taking shower.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
