Heavy Snowfall
I felt dull because I had drunk too much last night, but it was a fun time. Anyway, I had to go to the dentist to receive new aligners. I took a train to Alkmaar and walked for over 30 minutes. There was much more snow than in my village. At the dentist, the appointment took less than five minutes, but I had to walk for more than 30 minutes again. The snowfall was heavier than when I was going to the dentist. My pants were soaked. I visited an outdoor shop and bought a knit cap and a stainless steel case for snacks. The total cost was about €50. I went to the movie theater and watched La femme la plus riche du monde. It was a French movie with only Dutch subtitles. I did not understand almost any of the dialogue. One thing was that the cameraman, who was the main character, made me feel uncomfortable. I visited the bar ‘t Ossehoofd. It was my second time visiting there. I love the bar, but when I drink somewhere that is not my neighborhood bar, I cannot stop thinking about the train schedule, so I could not relax very much. That day, I only had nuts and pizza bread. I was supposed to take a shower, but someone was using the bathroom, so I gave up. I fell asleep just after 10 pm. As a healthy lifestyle habit, I read a book in bed for a while.
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- Heavy Snowing I felt dull because I had drink too much last night but it was fun time. Anyway, I had to go to the dentist to receive new aligners. I got train to Alkmaar and walked over 30 minutes. There were more snowing than in my living village. At the dentist, it was less than five minutes but I had to walk more 30 minutes again. The snowing is harder than I was coming the dentist. My pants was soaked. I visited an outdoor shop. I bought a knit cap and a stainless case for snack. The total cost was about €50. I went to the movie theater and watched La femme la plus riche du monde. It was a French movie and it was only Dutch subtitles. I did not understand almost all conversation. One thing, a camera man who is the main character made me disgusting. I visited the bar 't Ossehoofd. It was the second time visiting there. I love the bar but when I drink without neibours's bar, I do not like to consider train schedule so I did not relax very much. This day, I only had nuts and pizza bread. I supoosed to take a shower but someone used the bath room so I gave up. I fell asleep just after 10 pm. As a Healthyly lify, I read books for a while in the bed.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
