Going To a Museum
I left home around 10:30am and visited the nearest station. I bought a ticket. I visited an art museum to switch my mood. I took an English class. After that, I went to a standing bar. I moved to my hometown then visited my regular bar. It was full of customers but there was room. I ran into a friend who worked at an university. There was a man who had cancer. He showed me a photo of his expanded belly due to ascites. He said, “I went to a hospital then had 8kg of my belly water removed.” I went back home before 11pm then I had a late night meal. I fell asleep around midnight.
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- Going To Museum I left home around 10:30am and visited a nearest station. I bought a ticket. I visited an art museum for change. I took an English class. After that, I went to a standing bar. I moved to my home town then visited my regular bar. There were full of customers but there was a room. I met a friend who worked at an university. There was a man who ill a cancer. He showed me a photo which his expand belly due to ascites. He said "I went to a hospital then reduce the my belly water of 8kg." I went back home before 11pm then I had a late night meal. I fell asleep around midnight.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
