Getting a Meatball Dinner

I asked the landlord Jan to fix the poor surface of my room door, the broken cupboard door, and to change the old carpet. I continued cleaning up my room and packing for my trip. I went to the bar Stiefel. It was a lightly rainy day. I supposed to leave after only drinking two glasses of beer, but my friend Erol treated me to a special dinner. Furthermore, other customers bought me several glasses of beer consecutively. In the end, I was completely satisfied and drunk. I told the bar owner Maria that I will go back to Japan for months. After I got home, I just took shower and dove into bed. I fell asleep around 10pm.

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Getting a Meatball Dinner I asked to the landlord Jan to fix poor my room's door surface, broken cupboard's door, and change the old carpet. I continued cleaning up my room and packing for trip. I went to the bar Stiefel. It was a light rainy day. I supposed to leave only drinking two glasses of beer but my friend Erol gave me a special dinner. Furthermore, other customers bought m e several glasses of beer consecutively. In the end, I completely satisfied and drunk. I told to the bar owner Maria that I will go back to Japan for months. After I got home, I just took shower and dive in the bed. I fell asleep around 10pm.
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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