Gathering at the Bar
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I had an interview. She was a good impression so I hired her as a trial period. After 6pm, I visited a bar My Way as usual. I was going to back to home soon but an acquaintance suggested to join them. They gave me two glass of beer. We talked lively. However, I recognized the female bartender Roserly often go to the restroom. She looked under the wether clearly. “You should close the bar” I said but “I can’t close the bar” she said. When I left there, I gave 5EUR to her as my sympathy. I ran to a Thai food shop because all shops are closed at 8pm. I’m addicted their dishes. It was 9.5EUR. I fell asleep around 10pm.
The original text before the correction
- Gathering at the Bar I had an interview. She was a good impression so I hired her as a trial period. After 6pm, I visited a bar My Way as usual. I was going to back to home soon but an acquaintance suggested to join them. They gave me two glass of beer. We talked lively. However, I recognized the female bartender Roserly often go to the restroom. She looked under the wether clearly. "You should close the bar" I said but "I can't close the bar" she said. When I left there, I gave 5EUR to her as my sympathy. I ran to a Thai food shop because all shops are closed at 8pm. I'm addicted their dishes. It was 9.5EUR. I fell asleep around 10pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
