Drinking At Many Bars
It’s about time that, my aunt left my home. She stayed at my parents’ house for three nights. I went out to go to an English class around 3pm. The class started at 4:10pm. It was a useful lesson but I had to recognize how weak my listening skill is. After that, I visited UNIQLO then got some cloths. The bill came to about 13,000 yen. I entered a bar. It was not very comfortable so I moved to another one. There were many foreign tourists. I came back to my home town by tram before 10pm. I visited a bar again. It was a fun time. On top of all that, I moved to another one. At each izakaya, I was sunk in thought on my life. I visited four izakaya in total alone. However, the total cost was less than 10,000 yen. What a cheap country for everything! When I came back home, the house was locked and I could not find where my key is. I had to ring the door bell. My mom woke up and opened the door. I apologized about interrupting her sleeping time. I had a high-grade instant ramen for a night meal but it was so so. I fell asleep around 1a
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- Drinking At Many Bars Finally, my mother's sister left my home. She stayed my parents' house for three night. I went out to go to an English class around 3pm. The class started at 4:10pm. It was useful lesson but I had to recognize how weak on listening skill for me. After that, I visited UNIQLO then got some cloths. The bill came about 13000 yen. I entered a bar. It was not very comfortable so I moved to another one. There were many foreign tourists. I came back my home town by tram before 10pm. I visited a bar again. It was fun time. Furthermore, I moved to another one. At each izakaya, I was sunk in thought on my life. I visited four izakaya in total alone. However, total cost was less than 10000 yen. What a cheap country everything! When I came back home, the house was locked and I could not find where key is. I had to door bell. My mom woke up and opened the door. I apologies to interrupt her sleeping time. I had a high-grade instant ramen for night meal but it was so so. I fell asleep around 1am.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
