Dentist, Movie And So Forth
I went out of my house around 1:30 pm. I could not finish my daily routine, painting and writing. I took a train and arrived in Alkmaar. I walked for about 30 minutes. On the way to the dentist, I felt cozy. It reminded me of some of my memories. The treatment was finished in 30 minutes. I stopped by an outdoor goods store and got a plastic water bottle. It was about €15. I visited a movie theater and watched Christy. I could not understand what was interesting about it (also, I could not understand English very much). After that, I went to the bar Skip, but the inside was a bit cold and I was not feeling very well; therefore, I left after having only two drinks. I cooked oil spaghetti for dinner. It was a super economical meal. I fell asleep around 10 pm.
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- Dentist, Movie And So Forth I went out of my house around 1:30 pm. I could not finish my daily routine, painting and writing. I took a train and arrived Alkmaar. I walked for about 30 minutes. On the way to the dentsist, I felt cozy. It remineds me of my some memories. The treatment was finished in 30 minutes. I stopped by an outdoor goods store. I got a plastic water bottle. It was about €15. I visited a movie thaeate and watched Christy. I could not understand what is interesting it (Also, I could not understand English very much). After that, I went to the bar Skip but inside was bit cold and my feeling not so well; therefore, I left there after only having two driking. I cooked oil spaghetti for dinner. It was super economical cooking. I fell asleep around 10 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
