Coming a Nephew
It was a sunny day, furthermore, very summer has been coming already. I woke up at 7 am and ate breakfast. Afternoon, I went to have my hair cut. On the way going to a barbershop, I saw my sister, her husband, and her son in their car. The cutting took only 10 minutes and the bill was 1200 yen. I came home and gave an online lesson. It was difficult and made me tired to teach him the lesson. I talked with my sister and I got an idea to cook gyoza for dinner. I went to buy minced pork meat. We six had it together. I took a bath with my nephew. I was really sleepy so I said goodbye to them earlier than usual. I went to bed before 9 pm.
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- Coming a Nephew It was sunny day, furthermore, very summer has been coming already. I woke up 7am and ate breakfast. After noon, I went to cut my hair. On the way to a barber, I met a car that in my sister, her husband, and her son. The cutting was only 10 min and the bill was 1200yen. I came home and gave a lesson. It was difficult and tired to teach him. I talked with my sister and I got an idea to cook gyoza for dinner. I went to buy minced meat. We six had it together. I took a bath with my nephew. I was really sleepy so I said good bye to them earlier than usual. I went to bed before 9pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.