
At a Familiar Bar
I attended an English class at 4pm as usual. It was quite hard to understand. I am not good at listening. After that, I went to the bar. I had small stewed offals and beer or so. When I was drinking, a foreign couple came in. One staff member told another, “You should take the order from the foreigner (Gaijin-san)”. I thought it was nonsense because I had never heard such an expression abroad. I returned my home town then visited a regular bar, Tachimachi-ya around before 10pm and saw many familiar customers. I enjoyed very much. I hope I could visit there until the end of my life. I fell asleep around 1am.
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- The Familiar Bar I attended an English class at 4pm as usual. It was quite hard to understand. Listening is the weak point for me. After that, I went to the bar. I had small stewed offals and beer or so. When I was drinking, a foreign couple came in. Staffers talked "You should take an order for Foreigner(Gaijin-san)". I thought it was nonsense because I never heard such an expression abroad. I returned my home town then visited a regular bar, Tachimachi-ya around before 10pm but there were many familiar customers. I enjoyed very much. I hope I could visit there until the end of my life. I fell asleep around 1am.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.