Argument Or Discussion
I had an online lesson yesterday. I wanted to proceed with my tasks, and I tried to use the new text editor software NOVA (Coda2). The user interface looked nice. I cooked ginger pork, simmered vegetables, and so on. Eri went out to a hot spring then she came back at 5:40 p.m. After dinner, we discussed the relationship between me and Eri. Astonishingly, we all sobbed except my dad. Anyway, she is going to stay at my parents’ house for one more month. I don’t know whether her decision is good or bad. I fell asleep at 11 p.m. She said vulgar words in bed for the whole night.
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- Argument Or Discussion I had an online lesson yesterday. I wanted to proceed with tasks but I tried to use new text editor software NOVA(Coda2). It looks nice. I cooked ginger pork, simmered vegetables, and so on. Eri went out to hot spring then she came back at 5:40p.m. After dinner, we discussed about Eri and I relationship. Astonishingly, we were all sobbed except my dad. Anyway, she is going to stay my-parents-house one month more. I don't know her decision would be good or bad or something. I fell asleep at 11p.m. She said vulger-words-in-the-bed-for a whole night.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
