A Snowy Day

I had a business meeting with a potential client who works in England. We talked in English. I am not good at business English conversation but I grasped their issues. However, it will not be a lucrative job. I went to the bar Stiefel. On the way there, the roads were frozen and slippery. I took care not to fall because I did last year. Strangely, there were no customers. The bar owner Maria and the bartender Elsa were eating Thai food. “This is too hot!” she said. I fell asleep around 10pm. To be honest, these days, I write that my bed time is around 10pm but I don’t remember what time it was.

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A Snowing Day I had a business meeting with a potential client who worked at England. We talked in English. I am not good at business English conversation but I grabed their issues. However, it will not be a lucrative job. I went to the bar Stiefel. On the way there, load were frozen and slipperly. I cared do not fall because I did last year. Strangely, there were no customers. The bar owner Maria and a bartender Elsa had Thai food. "This is too hot!" she said. I fell asleep around 10pm. To be honest, these days, I write the bed time is around 10pm but I don't remember what time was it.
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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