A Rainy Day
I felt dull and had no motivation to do anything. I want to leave Japan as soon as possible. My current situation is disgusting. I visited the bar Takomon. After that, I was going to visit Kitaro, but it was full of customers when I arrived, and I looked inside from the outside. Therefore, I visited the bar Sanaya instead. I met a man who was around 60 years old. The bar owner, he, and I talked about Koshien (the biggest high school baseball tournament). We said that Koryo High School should be removed from the tournament at once because they have a serious problem with violence. I was astonished when he described his family relationship as a “shared house.” Every family has problems. I left there around 11:30 pm. After I returned home, I did the laundry and went to bed just after midnight.
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- A Rainy Day I was dull and I had no motivation anything. I want to leave Japan ASAP. My current situation is disgusting. I visited the bar Takomon. After that, I was goint to visit Kitaro but there was full of customer when I was arrived and I saw inside from the outside. Therefore; I visited the bar Sanaya instead. I met a man who is around 60 years old. The bar owner, he, and I talked about Koshien(The biggest high school baseball game). We talked Koryo high school has to remove at once because they have big problem of violence. I astonined he discribed his family relationship "Shared House". Every family has problem. I left there around 11:30 pm. After I returned home, I did the laundry. I went to bed just after midnight.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
