Watching a Movie on Sunday
I watched a movie called Goodfellas at a movie theater. The showtime was 3:15 pm. I arrived there about 15 minutes early. A woman in the audience talked to me. She said something like, “Your seat is too close to the screen.” I told her that I prefer seats like that. The movie was interesting enough. I thought the lives of gangsters are lucrative but not easy. They earn money by risking their own lives. I visited the bar Stiefel. It was packed, so I had to sit in an unusual chair. However, people greeted me and said cheers many times. It made me happy. Especially, Louis shook my hand and patted my shoulders. I bought him a beer, and then he bought me another one. The bar owner Maria distributed bitterballen and some snacks to customers for free. They were delicious. I had leftover stamppot and steamed vegetables. I cooked them in my room. Finally, I finished the mashed potatoes after eating them for days. I cannot look at them anymore. I fell asleep around 10:30 pm.
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- Watching A Movie On Sunday I watched a movie called Goodfellas at the movie theater. The beggining time was 3:15 pm. I arrived there earliar about 15 minutes. An audience who was woman talked to me. She said kind of Your seat is too close to the screen". I told her such a seat is favorite for me. The movie was interesting enough. I thought gangs live is ucurative but not easy. They get money by thier own life. I visited the bar Stiefel. It was packed so I had to sat down an unusual chair. However, people gave me hello and cheers a lot. It made me happy. Especially, Louis shook hands and patting my shoulders. I gave him a beer and then he also gave me another one. The bar owner Maria sdistributed bitterballen and some snacks for curstomers for free. It was dellicious. I had left over stamppot and steamed vegetables. I cooked in my room. Finally, I cleared up mashed potatoes! It was crazy enough for me. I fell asleep around 10:30 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
