Watching A Football Game
I did the laundry. In the evening, I went to the bar Stiefel. It was the day of the football game between the Netherlands and Sweden. I had fried potatoes. They were tasty. I met Darius again. He offered me a beer, and I declined at first, but I ended up accepting his offer. After that, his brother Kuba also came by. He talked to me for a while. He was quite annoying, so I left and moved to the bar My Way. It had a lively atmosphere. The result was an overwhelming 5-1 victory for the Netherlands. The bartender, Louisa, talked to me and kissed me on the cheek. She gave me a cigarette and said, “If you ever have trouble, such as having an annoying conversation with Darius or anyone else, please let me know.” She wanted me to have a pleasant time there. I really appreciate her hospitality. I came back home around 11 pm and cooked spaghetti for dinner. I was able to wait more than 90 minutes after eating before going to bed.
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- Watching A FootBall Game I did the laundry. In the evening, I went to the bar Stiefel. It was the day of the football game which The Netherlands vs. Sweden. I had fried potato. It was tasty. I met Darius again and again. He offred me a beer but I declined but I ended up accept his offer. After that, his brother Kuba also visited. He talked to me something. The brother was quite annoying so I left there and moved to the bar My Way. It was a lively atmospher. The game result was overwhelming victory for The Netherlands, 5 - 1. A bartender Louisa talked to me and kissed my cheek. She gave me a cigarret and she said, if you have trouble like to have annoying convesation with Darius or someone, pleasse do let me know. She wanted to me spend a pleasant time here. I really appriciate her hospitality. I came back home around 11 pm and I cooked spaghetti for dinner. I wasa able to wait over 90 minutes after eating.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
