Wandering in a Rainy Day

I went to a city center around 4pm. It was a rainy day. I visited a cheap bar. I felt depressed and I considered about my life. A counter seat was comfortable. After I came back to the nearest station from my house, I visited another bar. It was the first time visiting there since three or four years. I heard a young group did a fun quiz game. They said “What GPS omitted?” and “Global point sensor!”, “That’s wrong!”. For the last, I visited a ramen noodles shop. I had gyoza, fried rice, and ramen combo. I returned home and took a shower. I fell asleep just after 11pm.

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Wondering in a Rainy Day I went to a city center around 4pm. It was a rainy day. I visited a cheap bar. I felt depressed and I considered about my life. A counter seat was comfortable. After I came back the nearest station from my house, I visited another bar. It was the first time visiting there since three or four years. I heard a young group did a fun quiz game. They said "What GPS omitted?" and "Global point sensor!", "That's wrong!". For the last, I visited a ramen noodles shop. I had gyoza, fried rice, and ramen combo. I came back home and took a shower. I fell asleep just after 11pm.
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