Visiting a Friend’s House

It was a rainy day as usual. I went out my house after 3pm to go to Amsterdam. I stopped by a flower shop and bought a bouquet. I visited a friend’s house. She’s married with a Dutch man, Ronald. They are both great artists. Another person came in. It was my first time meeting him. He has a PhD in social geography. He is a clever man and his English is great. We talked about a variety of topics in English. We left there after 10pm. I bought a chicken burger at Amsterdam Station. After I came back home, I showered then went to bed. I fell asleep around 1am.

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Visiting a Friend's House It was a rainy day as usual. I went out my house after 3pm to go to Amsterdam. I stopped by a flower shop then got a bouquet as my gift. I visited a friend house. She married with a Dutch man, Ronald. They are both great artist. Other person came in. It was the first time to meet him. He studied as a PhD for social geography. He is a clever man and his English is great. We talked variety of topics in English. We left there after 10pm. I bought a chicken hamburger at Amsterdam station. After I came back home, I got shower then went to bed. I fell asleep around 1am.
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