Visited an Event
I went to Amsterdam to attend an event by Henri, a Dutch artist. It was quite a hot day. The event was held at the artist’s private house. The train was delayed, so I arrived just before 5 pm. When I entered the house, Henri was reading a poem aloud in front of the guests. There were about 20 people. Someone else also read a poem, just like Henri. The event was conducted in Dutch, so I could not understand anything. I left after about 15 or 20 minutes. I visited a craft beer bar. I enjoyed it very much and then moved to another bar. The bar owner recognized my face. After that, I went to a hamburger shop and ordered a hamburger. It was nice. However, when I left my seat to go to the restroom, my table was cleared. I was actually a bit angry because I had been in a good mood. I bought a vegan hamburger at Amsterdam Station and cooked spaghetti at home. I clearly ate too much that night. I fell asleep around 11 pm.
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- Visited An Event I went to Amsterdam to join an event of Henri who is a Dutch artist. It was quite hot day. The event was held at the artist's private housel. The train was delayed so I reached there just before 5 pm. When I entered inside the house, Henri read a poem with voice in front of people. There were about 20 people. Someone also read a poem as the same Henri. It was proceed with Dutch so I completely could not understand. I left there in 15 or 20 minutes. I visited the craft beer bar. I enjoyed very much and I moved to another bar. The bar owner remembered of my face. I moved to hamburger shop. I ordered humberger. It was nice. However, when I leave the seat to go to a restroom, my table was cleared up. I got angry actually because I had in a good mood. I bought vegan humberger at Amsterdam station and I cooked spahetti at my house. I ate cleary too much for this night. I fell asleep around 11 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
