Talking With a Share Mate
It was a rainy day. I cleared up my room. I have to keep my room tidy because the environment affects my mental health. I also did the laundry. In the evening, I visited the bar Stiefel. They had prepared an event for a football game, The Netherlands vs Turkey. It was scheduled to start at 9 pm. The bar owner Maria gave me a piece of pita topped with raw ham. It was tasty, so I ordered a glass of red wine. After returning home, when I was cooking dinner, my share mate, Peter, a 32-year-old Hungarian, asked me if there were any problems because he had no experience living with a share mate. He is talkative, so we moved to his room and talked for over an hour. His talk was endless, so I left when I felt tired. (However, he is a nice guy). I fell asleep before 11 pm.
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- Talking With a Share Mate It was the rainy day. I cleared up my room. I have to keep tidy my room because the environment would affect my mental health. I did the laundry also. In the evening, I visited the bar Stiefel. They prepared an event for foot ball game, The Netherlands vs Turky. It should be started at 9 pm. The bar owner Maria gave me a pieces of pita topped on raw ham. It was tasty so I ordered a glass of red wine. After returned home, when I cooked dinner, my share mate, Peter, 32 years old Hangarian, talked me that is there any problems because he has not experience living with a share mate. He is talkative so we moved to his room then we talked for over an hour. His talk was endless so I left there when I felt tired. (However, he is a nice guy). I fell asleep before 11 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.