Revisiting The Dentist
I left my house at 2 pm and headed to visit the dentist. The weather was cloudy, but there was no rain. At the dental clinic, while I was waiting for my turn, a 13-year-old Syrian boy started talking to me. He seemed interested in me. Since there was no water available, he asked the receptionist for a cup of water and brought it to me. The waiting time was quite long, so I drew a diagram of how to solve my tooth problem. The dentist was astonished by it. “How do you know this? From Google? I was also planning a similar treatment,” she said. I explained that my life is full of dental problems, in a nutshell, this is my experience. The treatment was not painful, even though I did not receive anesthesia. Afterward, I went to a bar that I had never visited before. I had four kinds of beer. After I returned to my village, I got some Thai food to go for dinner. It was not as tasty as usual. The cause was likely my mood; I had to be careful with every bite because of my tooth condition. I want to eat freely! I made a hotel reservation in Korea. I fell asleep around 11:30 pm.
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- Revisiting The Dentist I left my house after at 2 pm. I headed to visit a dentist. The weather was cloudy but no rain. At the dental clinic, When I wait for my turn, a syrian boy who is 13 is talked to me. He seemed interested in me. He asked me to get a cup of water to a receptionist. Waiting time was quite long so I drew how to solve my tooth problem. The dentist astonished about it. "How do you know the knowledge? On Google? I also supposed to such treatment plans". I explained that my life is full of teeth problem, in a nuts shell, this is my experience. The treatment was not pain even though no anesthesia. I went to the bar which I never visit. I had four kind of beer. After I returned my vllage, I got Thai food to go for dinner. It was not so tasty than usual. The cause is my feeling. I have to care my tooth condition every bite. I want to eat freely! I fell asleep around 11:30 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.