There are a boy and old lady in the yard. they are having BBQ at home

Not Fun BBQ

I woke up around 6 am. I skipped breakfast but I had a cup of milk with green juice powder. In the morning, my nephews came home. They were watching Youtube for an entire day. I am worried about their lifestyle and future but I used to play video games just like them. I did my daily tasks and proceeded with the clients’ work. I stopped work at 5 pm then I went to a store with my nephews. We had a BBQ in our yard with my parents. The boys’ attitude was terrible. Their behavior was like a king. To be honest, I was irritated about it but I had no choice. After 9 pm, my sister came home, too. We talked a lot. I got into bed just before 11 pm.

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Not Fun BBQ I woke up around 6am. I skipped breakfast but I had a cup of milk with green powder. In the morning, my nephews came home. They were watching Youtube for a whole day. I worry about their life style and future but I used to play video game as the same as them. I did my daily tasks and proceeded with the clients' work. I stopped work at 5pm then I went to a store with my nephews. We had BBQ at yard with my parents. The boys attitude was terrible. Their behavior is like a king. To be honest, I irritated about it but I had no choice. After 9pm, my sister came home, too. We talked a lot. I got into bed just before 11pm.
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