after eating dinner messy wooden table

Not Feeling Well

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I woke up around 9am with slight hang over. However, I had ramen noodles for breakfast. It made me full so I went to back to bed. It was a public holiday in Japan, it called Culture Day Holiday. I had no work. I wasn’t able to do my daily routines perfectly. I prepared pita sandwiches. I didn’t have appetite. The orchid flowers withered day by day. I hope those are keeping bloom for more a month. It was unusual for me didn’t visit a bar. I fell asleep around 7pm but I woke up midnight then couldn’t sleep by the morning. Now, I felt sleepy but I had to attend a business meeting. 

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Not Feeling Well I woke up around 9am with slight hang over. However, I had ramen noodles for breakfast. It made me full so I went to back to bed. It was a public holiday in Japan, it called Culture Day Holiday. I had no work. I wasn't able to do my daily routines perfectly. I prepared pita sandwiches. I didn't have appetite. The orchid flowers withered day by day. I hope those are keeping bloom for more a month. It was unusual for me didn't visit a bar. I fell asleep around 7pm but I woke up midnight then couldn't sleep by the morning. Now, I felt sleepy but I had to attend a business meeting. 
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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