Leaving The Dutch Couple
We had our last dishes, breakfast, with a Dutch couple. I recommended them to have natto, but they did not. They left our home at 9pm. They were going to Onomichi by their rental car. We said goodbye at the car park. We all hugged and shook hands. My mom cried a bit. Around noon, I went to a shopping center with my mom, my sisters, and her kids. We forgot our dad’s birthday, so we bought shirts and whale meat as his gift. After that, we visited gyoza shop Osho. One of my sister’s kids cried a lot. We came back home and rested until evening. We had dinner and said goodbye to my sister’s family. It was a super long and exciting 2-night-3-day journey. I soaked in hot water and went to bed before 10pm. I fell asleep quickly.
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- Leaving The Dutch Couple We had a last dishes, breakfast, with the Dutch couple. I recommended them to have natto but they did not eat. They left our home at 9pm. The were going to Onomichi by their rental car. We said good bye at car park. My were all hugged and shake hands. My mom cried a bit. Around noon, I went to a shopping center with my mom, my sisters, and her kids. We forgot our dad's birthday so we bought shirts and whale meat to his gift. After that, we visited gyoza shop Osho. One of my sister's kid cried hardly. We came back home and rest until evening. We had dinner and said good bye to my sister's family. It was a super long and excited 2 nights 3 days journey. I soaked hot water and went to bed before 10pm. I fell asleep at once.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.