Job Interview
I went to a job interview in Amsterdam at 4:30 pm. The shop was fancier and more girlish than I expected. The owner was a fifty-one-year-old woman. I was able to have a good conversation in English and I hope I gave her a good impression. After that, I had a steamed pork bun and visited three kinds of bars. I enjoyed every bar. I have visited the last bar several times, and the older bartender lady remembered my girlfriend and me. It made me happy. I asked her about her eye disease. Around 9 pm, when I came back home, I met Jan, so I shared what happened today, including the job interview. I fell asleep around 10 or 11 pm.
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- Job Interview I went to a job interview in Amsterdam at 4:30 pm. It was fancier and more garlish shop than I expected. The owner was a woman who is 51 years old. I was able to good conversation in English. I hope I would give her a good impression. After that, I had a steamed pork bun and I visited three kind of bars. I enjoyed every bars. The last bar, I have visited several times. A elder bartender lady remembered my girlfriend and I. It made me happy. I asked her eye desease condition. Around 9 pm, When I came back home, I met Jan so I shared what happend today, abotu job interview. When I fell asleep around 10 or 11 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
