Investigating Money
I am really crazy about how to increase money these days. When I was in my twenties, I didn’t have interest in money; furthermore, I hate money. However, I have been thinking about money. I don’t think this is a good habit, but my philosophy is that if you are going to do something you should immerse yourself in it thoroughly. When I was a kid, I was addicted to video games, but my parents didn’t give me any restrictions, so I played them until I got bored at the end of high school. It was really good education for me. I went to the bar Stiefel. I had 3 glasses of beer and a hot sandwich. After I came back home, I had salad, packed brown rice with salmon flakes, and bread for dinner. I fell asleep after 11pm.
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- Investigating Money I am really crazy how to increasing money these days. When I was in twenties I didn't have interested in Money, further more, I hate money. However; I have been thinking about money. I don't think this is not good habit but, as my philosophy, if you would immerse yourself something, you must do that thoroughly. When I was a kid, I was addicted video game but my parents didn't give me any restrictions so, finally, I got bored till being graduate high school. It was really good education for me. I went to the bar Stiefel. I had 3 glasses of beer and hot sandwich. After I came back home, I had salad, packed brown rice with salmon flakes, and bread for dinner. I fell asleep after 11pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.