In Bad Shape
I was not feeling well for some reason, so I took some medicine. I had a headache. I did the laundry. In the laundry room, Jan tried to fix the plumbing. In the evening, I went to the bar Stiefel. I met Tonny for the first time in over four months. In my room, I had a discounted packed salad and grilled pork for dinner. I fell asleep before 10 pm but woke up at midnight. Then, I could not sleep because a housemate was having a phone call. It was super noisy and annoying. Why does he have such long and frequent phone calls? He should reduce the frequency of his phone calls.
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- In Bad Shape I was not feeling well for some reason so I got a medicine. I had a headache. I did the laundry. In a laundry room, Jan did try to fix waterway facility. In the evening, I went to the bar Stiefel. I met Tonny for the first time since over four months. At my room, I had discounted packed salad and grilled pork for dinner. I fell asleep before 10 pm but I woke up at midnight. Then, I was not sleep because a housemate was having phone call. It was super noisy and annoying. Why does he have phone call so long and often. He should reduce frequency the number of phone call.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.