Her Illness

I talked with Eri for the first time in over half a year. She got serious ill but I was not astonished very much. We have to die sooner or later. In the first place, I am a cold person. In the evening, I went to the bar Stiefel. While I was drinking, I got an idea to send money to Eri. I prepared 500,000 JPY and then remitted it to her. I don’t know why I did such a ridiculous thing but I wanted to express money has no meaning. I am addicted to money these days so I wanted to let go of money anytime if I need. On the way home, I stopped by a Thai food shop then got four kinds of dishes for to go. It was tasty as usual. I fell asleep around 9pm.

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Her Illness I talked with Eri for the first time in over half a year. She got serious ill but I didn't astonish very much. We have to die sooner or later. In the first place, I am cold person. In the evening, I went to the bar Stiefel. While I drinking, I got an idea to send money to Eri. I prepared 500,000 JPY and then transferred it to her. I don't know why I did such a ridiculous thing but I wanted to express money is no meaning. I am addicted money these days so I wanted to let go money anytime if I need. On the way home, I stopped by Thai food shop then got four kind of dishes for to go. It was tasty as usual. I fell asleep around 9pm.
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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