Gathering at the Bar
I had two business meetings. I tried to give good impression but I didn’t know how do they feel. I worked hard until around 5:30pm. I went to the bar My Way. I was going to think about my business there but it was quite packed. I sat on a seat next to Ruud. We are talking about Eri. He said she is a nice woman. I said I don’t think so. I treated him a drink and he also treated me a drink. I was overwhelmed with the atmosphere so I smoked a cigarette with him. It was disgusting. I had 4 or 5 glasses of beer. I ate only nuts. Coming back home, I had ramen noodles and fried rice for dinner. I dropped asleep around before 11pm.
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- Gathering at the Bar I had two business meetings. I tried to show good impression but I didn't know how do they feel. I worked hard until around 5:30pm. I went to the bar My Way. I was going to think my business there but there were quite packed. I sat on next to Ruud. We are talking about Eri. He said she is a nice woman. I said I don't think so. I treated him a drink and he also treated me a drink. I was overwhelmed with atmosphere so I smoked a cigarette with him. It was bad. I had 4 or 5 glasses of beer. I ate only nuts. After came back home, I had ramen noodles and fried rice for dinner. I dropped asleep around before 11pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
