Escaping My House
I was sluggish. I did the minimum of my daily routine and went out. I visited an onsen called Hono-yu. I also took a nap and felt a little refreshed. It was cloudy and drizzling lightly. I visited a bar called Nagomi. When I was leaving, I left my book on the table, but a member of the bar staff, Akira-san, pointed it out to me. I felt more drunk than usual. However, I did not want to go back home because I did not want to see my father, and he had made me feel disgusted. So I moved on to another bar called Kitaro. There were fewer customers than usual, so I relaxed and concentrated on reading my book. Just after 10 pm, I left and returned home. Fortunately, both of my parents had gone to bed. I was relieved about that. I went to bed just after 11 pm.
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- Escaping My House I was sllugish. I did minimum daily routine and went out. I visited an onsen bath Hono-yu. I took nap also and I refreshed a bit. It was cloudy and weak rainy day. I visited the bar Nagomi. When I was leaving there, I left my book on the table but the bar staff member told me about it. I felt getting more drunk than usual. However, I did not want to go back home because I do not want to see my father and he made me disgusting then I moved to the bar Kitaro. There were fewer customers than normal so I relaxed and concentrate reading book. Just after 10 pm, I left there and returned home. Fortunately, my parents were both went to bed. I relieved about it. I went to bed just after 11 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
