Endless Drinking

I heard the doorbell many times around noon, but I ignored it. However, the ringing was persistent, so I went to open the door. It was my dad; he had left his house key. “I waited for over an hour,” he said. Later, I went to a bar called Nagomi, then moved on to Tachimachi-ya. I met many interesting people, including some new faces. I enjoyed the time as usual, and time flew by. If the bar prohibited smoking, it would be the perfect place for me. There are just too many heavy smokers. I left around 11 pm. When I came back home, my mom had come back from watching a Carp baseball game. She had bought some yakitori and other snacks, so I had a bit of those. I fell asleep just after midnight.

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Drinking Forever I heard the door bell many time around noon but I ignored it but the ring was too much so I went to open the door. It was my dad he left a house key. "I waited for over an hour" he said. I went to a bar Nagomi then moved Tachimachi-ya. I met many interesting people including new faces. I enjoyed the time as usual then time flies. If the bar would prohibit smoking, it must be the best place for me. There are too many heavy smokers. I left there around 11pm. When I came back home, my mom had come back watching Carp baseball game. She bought some yakitori etc., so I had it a bit. I fell asleep just after midnight.
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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