
Easter Day
It was Easter, so I should have gone to church, but I did not go because I was sleepy and sluggish. I am a bad Catholic. In the evening, I went to the bar Vlaar. There was a barricade installed in front of the bar. A rock band was playing live. The place was packed and noisy. Inside the bar was also crowded. There was a queue for the restroom. I met Raula, and she asked why I had not visited the bar My Way the previous night, because it was the one year anniversary of the bar. These days, I do not go there very often, so I did not know about the event. I felt sorry about that. I had only one bottle of beer because the atmosphere was too noisy for me to stay. I continued drinking in my room. My housemate was out somewhere, so it was quite cozy. The sky and the flowing clouds were beautiful. I felt a deep satisfaction.
The original text before the correction
- An Easter Event It was The Easter day so I should go to a church but I did not go there because I was sleepy and sllugish. I am a bad Catholic believer, In the evening, I went to the bar Vlaar. There were installed a barricade at the front of the bar. The rock band had a live event. The place was packed and noisy. Inside the bar was also packed. There was a queue for the restroom. I met Raula and she said why did not visit the bar My Way the previous night because the day was the 1 year anniversally for the bar. These days, I do not go there so often so I did not the event. I was sorry about that. I had only one bottle of beer because the atomosphere was too noisy to stay for me. I continued drinking at my room. The sharemate was out somewhere so it was quite cozy. The sky and flowing clouds was beautiful. I felt deep satisfaciton.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




