
Day 2 Staying at a Hotel
I woke up around 6am but the time flies so it is now around 3pm. I had breakfast because the hotel’s plan included it. I took too much food so I wasted food. It was really shameful behavior. I went to a beach and a supermarket to do my art activities. It was cold and dark. I took a bath for an hour. After that, I went to the bar which is located inside the hotel. I had 3 glasses of beer and chicken wings. I continued drinking wine and I had instant noodles in my room. I fell asleep around 11pm. I wanted to stay, further, I want to live in a hotel forever.
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- Day 2 Staying at a Hotel I woke up around 6am but the time flies so it is being around 3pm. I had breakfast because the hotel's plan is included it. I took dishes too much so I made waste food. It was really ashame behavior. I went to a beach and a supermarket to do my art activities. It was cold and dark. I took a bath for an hour. After that, I went to the bar which placed inside the hotel. I had 3 glasses of beer and chicken wing. I continued drinking wine and I had an instant noodles at my room. I fell asleep around 11pm. I wanted to stay, furthermore, I want to live a hotel forever.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.