
Counselling for a Brace
I had a meeting at 10am. It was in a good mood. I set off to go to a dentist located in Alkmaar by train. It was rainy. I had to transfer a bus but I made a mistake. The bus took me far away. I had to go back. When I transferred the bus, I asked to buy a ticket by credit card because my OV chipcard had an error. The bus driver said “You can go”. I took the bus for free. I got there before 1pm. The teeth straightening plan will need a year and a half. The cost will be 3000EUR. I stopped by a mall and I visited a cafe along a canal. It had a nice interior. I had 2 glasses of beer and crocket. I came back home around 4:30pm. I had grilled salmon, rice with curry sauce. I fell asleep before 9pm.
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- Counselling for a Brace I had a meeting at 10am. It was in a good mood. I departed to go to a dentist located in Alkmaar by train. It was rainy. I had to transfer bus but I mistook. The bus brought me far away. I had to go back. When I transfer the bus, I asked to buy a ticket by a credit card because my OV chipcard had error. He said "You can go". I took a bus for free. I reached there before 1pm. The teeth straightening plan will need a year and a half. The cost will be 3000EUR. I stopped by a mall and I visited a cafe along a canal. It was nice interior. I had 2 glasses of beer and crocket. I came back home around 4:30pm. I had grilled salmon, rice with curry sauce. I fell asleep before 9pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.