Cleaning a Room
I cleaned up my room. It was not perfect but it is okay. I also did the laundry. I checked some job-related messages for starting the new week, Monday. I went to the bar Stiefel. It was packed due to a football game shown on the screen. I found a seat next to Peter. He looked dirty as usual. To be honest, he is a bit smelly. He had been speaking monologue. I am concerned about his mental health. However, I feel sympathy for his loneliness. The bartender Ivon distributed snacks to customers. I got a deviled egg. I have been considering how I should make a better life. I had tomato salmon spaghetti for dinner. I fell asleep around 10pm.
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- Cleaning a Room I did clear up for my room. It was not perfect but it is okay. I also did the laundry. I checked the job related message for starting the new week, Monday. I went to the bar Stiefel. It was packed due to holding a football game. I found a seat next to Peter. He looks like dirty normally. To be honest, he is bit smelly. He had been speaking monologue. I am concerned about his mental health. However, I feel a sympathy with his loneliness. The bartender Ivon distributed snacks for customers. I got a deviled egg. I have been considering how I should make a better life. I had tomato salmon spaghetti for dinner. I fell asleep around 10pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
