
Children’s Voice
My sisters’ three children came yesterday. They are 11, 8, and 4 years old. Needless to say, it was noisy for the whole day but not so bad. I worked at home even though it was a public holiday. I had a potato crocket for dinner. We, all seven people, had it together. When I was a kid, I had dinner with seven family members every time but now, my grandfather passed away, my grandmother is in a nursing home, two sisters moved out because they got married therefore, only three people remain here. I fell asleep at 10 p.m. It was a normal day but a fabulous day.
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- Children's Voice My sisters' three children came yesterday. They are 11, 8, and 4 years old. Needless to say, it was noisy for whole day but not so bad. I worked at home even though public holiday. I had potato crocket for dinner. We all seven people had it together. When I was a kid, I had dinner seven family member every time but now, grandfather passed away, grandmother is in nursing home, two siters move out by marrige therefore, only three people remaining here. I fell asleep at 10 p.m. It was a normal day but a fabulous day.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.