Checking The Hair
It was a busy day. There were two meetings and an online lesson. I gave up an order from a new client because I thought I would not be able to get it, but they changed their mind. They gave me an offer finally. After 1 pm, I went to a clinic to ask about my hair. For the past few years, I worry about my hair getting thinner. The doctor checked my scalp with a microscope. His looking was flirtatious but his advice was sincere. “Your hair is not bad.” I got relieved. After that, I checked in the hotel. I continued to work there. At 5:30 pm, I went to a bar. I had yakitori, oden etc. I came back to the hotel, I continued drinking till 9 pm. I fell asleep around 10pm.
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- Checking The Hair It was busy day. There were two meetings and an online lesson. I gave up an order from a new client but they changed their mind. They gave me an offer finally. After 1pm, I went to a clinic to ask about my hair. For past few years, I worry about my hair is going to thinner. The doctor was checked by microscope to my scalp. His looking was flirting but his advice was sincere. "Your hair is not bad." I've relieved. After that, I checked in the hotel. I continued to work there. At 5:30pm, I went to a bar. I had yakitori, oden etc. I came back hotel, I continued drinking till 9pm. I fell asleep around 10pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.