Checked Out of the Hotel
I woke up around 9 am. I was tired, so I was able to sleep deeply. I had leftover strawberries in the morning. I did muscle training and took a shower. I then checked out of the hotel. It was a nicer hotel than I expected. I visited another hotel’s cafe. I did some computer work. I came back to my house around 3 pm. The tulip in a vase was withered. I felt sorry about it because I had been away from the house for a couple of days. I changed the water for it anyway. I went to the fish shop and bought fried shrimp. I entered the bar Vlaar (formerly Johnny’s Cafe) and had beer with some of the shrimp I bought earlier. It was tasty. I moved to the bar My Way. They were still in a party mood, so it was packed. I do not like busy atmospheres. I saw an interesting scene. An old man was watching a football game on the TV. A party decoration was hanging in front of the TV, so he borrowed a pair of scissors and cut it himself! When I came back home, Janine was having a birthday party with her children, but I did not want to join, so I returned to my room directly. I cooked discounted packed fried rice with frozen peas for dinner. The fried shrimp was still left, so I added it. I fell asleep just before 9 pm.
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- Checked Out Of The Hotel I woke up around 9 pm. I was tired so I was able to sleep deeply. I had leftover strawberry in the morning. I did mastle training and took a shower. I then checked out of the hotel. It was nicer hotel than I expected. I visited another hotel's cafe. I did some computer work. I came back to my house around 3 pm. Tulip in a vase was withered. I felt sorry about it that I absent the house for couple of days. I changed the water for it anyway. I went to the fish shop and then I bought fried shrimp. I entered to the bar Vlaar (formerly Johnny's Cafe) and I had beer with shrimp. It was tasty. I moved to the bar My Way. They were still party mood so it was packed. I do not like busy atomosphere. I saw an interesting scene. An old man watched a football game on the TV. A party decoration was hanging front of the TV so he borroed a pair of scissor and then he cut it himself! When I came back home, Janine had a birth day party with her children but I did not want to joing so I returned my room directory. I cooked discounted packed fried rice with flozen peas for dinner. The fried shrimp was still remained so I added it. I fell asleep just before 9 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
