Chance Encounters

I had an English class at 4pm. I left there at 6pm then visited a yakitori bar; It was not so good, so I moved to the bar which I used to visit frequently; It was the first time for over three years. The elderly couple bar owners remembered me. There were foreign tourists. I asked them where they came from; astonishingly, they came from Holland, The Hague. I expressed that I lived there and I passed my contact information to them. I came back to my home town then entered the bar ‘Tachimachi-ya’. Some regular customers welcomed me. It made me happy from the bottom of my heart. I forgot their names, so I asked again. One man is called Saeki-san and one woman is called Takarazuka(This is just a nickname because she loves the Takarazuka operetta troupe.). There was a Hosshan who is seriously ill. His belly is crazily expanded due to ascites. He told me his situation. “I spent my boring life gambling, but I stopped doing that. And then, I got too much free time so I started drinking day and night”. I left there after midnight. After I got home, I took a shower and I dove into my bed around 1am.

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Chance Encounters I had an English class at 4pm. I left there at 6pm then visited a yakitori bar. It was not so good therefore; I moved to the bar which I used to visit frequently. It was the first time for over three years. The elder couple bar owners remembered of me. There was an foreign tourists. I asked them where they come, astonishingly, they came from Holland, The Hague. I expressed I live in there and I passed my contact information. I came back to my home town then entered the bar Tachimachi-ya. Some regular customers welcomed me. It made me happy from the bottom of my heart. I forgot their name so I asked again. A man is called Saeki-san and another woman called Takarazuka(This is just a nickname because she loves the Takarazuka operetta troupe.). There was an Hosshan he got serious ill. His belly is crazy expand due to ascites. He expressed me his situation. "I spent my boring life to do gambling but I stopped to do that. And then, I got too much free time so I started drinking day and night". I left there after midnight. After I got home, I took shower and I dove in my bed around 1am.
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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