Attending a Concert
I was not good condition due to drinking too much. I went out of my bed around 1pm. I prepared to go a concert. The place was a 15-minute walk away from my house. It was an artist’s house. I knew the place but it was the first time entering the house. A man and woman duo played a guitar and sang a song. There were 20 to 30 audiences there. There were a lot of paintings and sculptures displayed there. It should call it kind of a private museum. I talked to some people and I spent there 2 hours or so. After that, I visited Steakhouse Bij de Buurvrouw alone. I had two glasses of beer and French fries. I considered how to make my new life style. I had discounted packed Asian food with cream chicken pea soup for dinner. I fell asleep before midnight.
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- Attending a Concert I was not good condition due to drinking too much. I went out my bed around 1pm. I prepared to go a concert. The place is located 15 min from my house by walk. It was an artist's house. I know the place but it was the first time entering inside the house. A man and woman duo played a guitar and sing a song. There were 20 to 30 audiences there. There were lot of paintings and sculptures displayed there. It should call kind of a private museum. I talked some people and I spent there 2 hours or so. After that, I visited Steakhouse Bij de Buurvrouw alone. I had two glasses of beer and French fries. I had been considered how to make my new living style. I had discounted packed Asian food with cream chicken pea soup for dinner. I fell asleep before midnight.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
