
An Unusual Day
I woke up around 4am because I went to bed crazy early at the previous night. I finished my daily routines by 8am. I had coffee with a sweet bun. I cooked olive spaghetti, too. I worked and read books. I tried to take a nap but I couldn’t. I painted for an hour. After that, I updated my company’s website. I closed the Shopify website because I could not make any profit on it. After 7pm, I went to a bar, Johnny’s Cafe. There was not the bar owner, Johnny but his wife Maria. She told me some of her friends might be able to help my learning about Dutch language. I drank three kind of beer and variety of fries. The bill came about 30EUR. It was bit expensive. I stopped by a supermarket then I got red wine and grape etc. I didn’t know why I didn’t feel sleepy. Finally, I fell asleep just after 1am.
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- An Unusual Day I woke up around 4pm because I went to bed crazy early at the previous night. I finished my daily routines till 8am. I had coffee with a sweet bread. I cooked olive spaghetti, too. I worked and read books. I tried to take a nap but I couldn't. I painted for an hour. After that, I updated my company's website. I closed the Shopify website because it did not make any profit for me. After 7pm, I went to a bar, Johnny's Cafe. There was not the bar owner, Johnny but his wife Maria. She told me some her friends might help my learning about Dutch language. I drank three kind of beer and variety of fries. The bill came about 30EUR. It was bit expensive. I stopped by a supermarket then I got red wine and grape etc. I didn't know why I didn't feel sleepy. Finally, I fell asleep just after 1am.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.