A family are having BBQ at outside in Hiroshima Kamagari island Japan

A Short Trip

I woke up before 7 pm. I had a soft boiled egg, natto with rice, and soup for breakfast. I worked a bit then I went to my sister’s house with my mom by car. We transferred to my sister’s car and we all 5 including her two sons departed toward Kamagari. We arrived there around 3 pm. We checked in at a cottage. I went to seashore with my nephews and enjoyed swimming. My sister went fishing but a fishhook stung her foot. She considered to go to a hospital; however, fortunately, a man who was fishing near her rescued. The dinner was BBQ. We talked very much and spent a really fun time. I fell asleep around 10 pm, maybe.

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A Short Trip I woke up before 7pm. I had a soft boiled egg, natto with rice, and soup for breakfast. I worked a bit then I went to my sister's house with my mom on a car. We transfered on my sister's car and we all 5 including her two sons departed toward Kamagari. We arrived there around 3pm. We checked in a cottage. I went to seashore with my nephews and swimming. My sister went to fishing but a fishhook stucked her foot. She considered to go to a hospital, however, fortunately, a man who is fishing near from her rescued. The dinner was bbq. We talked very much and spent a really fun time.
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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