A Movie That Moved My Soul
These days, my sharemate does not go out anywhere even on weekends. I do not like staying in the house very much, so I visited a movie theater. I watched The Shining, which was produced by Stanley Kubrick. I watched it when I was a university student, but I had forgotten almost all the details. From the very beginning, the movie gave me a strong and pure impression. I want to applaud this great film. What a great movie exists in the world. I realized that I still keep my artistic sense. After that, I visited the bar Stiefel. There was only one customer, Mike. He told me that day was the bartender Elsa’s birthday. I said “Happy Birthday” in Dutch to her and bought her a drink. Mike left soon. The bar was going to have a music event that night, so customers would come later than usual. I reflected again on the fantastic movie. After about 30 minutes, Martine came in. He offered me a drink, but I had already had enough for that night. We shook hands and I left. I had stir fried vegetables, canned baked herring, and sliced bread for dinner. I read a book before sleeping.
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- Moving My Soul These days, a sharemate do not go out anywhere even though during weekends. I do not want to stay the house very much so I visited a movie theater. I watched The Shining which produced by Stanley Kubrik. I watched this one when I was a university student but I forgot almost all details. In the first place, the movie gave me pure strong impression. I want to appluase the great movie. What a great movie exist in the world. I realized that I have still keep my artistic sense. After that, I visited the bar Stiefel. There were only one customers, Mike. He told me that day is the bartender Elsa's birthday. I said "Happy Birthday" in Dutch to her and gave her a drink. Mike left at once. The bar was going to have a music event this night so customers will came later than usual. I reconsider the fantastic movie. After about 30 minutes, Martine came in. He offered a drink but I felt enough for drinking this night. We shook hands and I left there. I had stir flied vegetables, canned baked harring, and a sliced bread for dinner. I read books before sleeping.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
