A Long Night
I had an English class. On the way there, I dropped by an optician to collect a pair of glasses. The new lenses were a good fit. After taking the lesson, I entered a super cheap bar, but it was not so comfortable. I moved to the nearest station then visited a regular bar, Tachimachi-ya. I brought an energy drink to the owner because I heard she got the flu and closed the bar a couple of days ago. I met some friends. The bar owner’s mother introduced my background, that I am an artist and live in the Netherlands, to new customers again and again. I had a great time as usual. I left there just after 10:30 pm. After I came back home, I had instant noodles for a late-night meal. I fell asleep around 1 am.
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- A Long Night I went to an English class. On the way there, I dropped in an optician to receive a pair of glasses. The new lenses were good fit for my eyes. After taking a lesson, I entered a super cheap bar but it was not so comfortable. I moved to my nearest station then visited a regular bar, Tachimachi-ya. I brought an energy drink to the owner because I heard she got flu and closed the bar coupled of days ago. I met some friends. The bar owner's mother introduced my background, artist and live in The Netherlands, to new customers again and again. I spent fun time as usual. I left there just after 10:30 pm. After I came back home, I had instant noodles for a late-night meal. I fell asleep around 1 am.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
