A Long Movie Afternoon
I had half a serving of ramen noodles with plenty of vegetables in the morning. I normally do not eat such solid food in the morning, so it made me feel sick. I went to the movie theater around 3 pm. On the way there, I stopped by a farmers market to buy ginger. These days, I drink ginger tea every morning. I believe it improves my health. I watched the movie Nuremberg. It was too long to watch at 2 hours and 45 minutes. I was partially able to enjoy it, especially the scene showing a large number of human bodies being cleared away by a bulldozer at Nazi concentration camps. It was shocking but interesting to me. I visited the bar Stiefel. I had three kinds of beer. When I ordered the last beer, Tessa told the bar owner Maria, “Could you add his drink to my account?” I thought that I had given her a glass of wine last time, so she returned the favor. I skipped dinner because I wanted to be in the best condition for my part-time job the next day; however, the shift had been changed from 12 pm to 7 pm to 2 pm to 7 pm just the day before. I fell asleep just before 11 pm, which was accurate because I was almost sober.
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- Watching A Movie I had half of ramen noodles with plenty vegetables in the morning. I normall do not eat such solid food in the morning so it made me sick. I went to the movie theater around 3 pm. On the way there, I stopped by a farmers market to get ginger. These days, I drink ginger tea every morning. It must be improved for my health. I watched the movie Nuremberg. It was too long to watch, 2 hours 45 minutes. Partially I was able to enjoyed, especially, a bunch of human bodys cleared up by a bulldozer at Nazi concentration camps. It was shocking but interesting for me. I visited the bar Stiefel. I had three kind of beers. When I ordered the last beer, Tessa told the bar owner Maria "Could you add his drink to my account?". I thought that I gave her a glas of wine last time so she returned to me. I skip the dinner because I wanted to prepare the best condition for the part-time job next day (However; the shift has been changed from 12:00 - 19:00 to 14:00 - 19:00 very just before day). I fell asleep just before 11 pm (It was accuratry because I was almost sober.)
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
