
A Great Movie
I attended Sunday mass in the morning. It was quite a cold day. Around 3 pm, I went to the movie theater and watched The Wolf of Wall Street. It was an impressive movie for me. It was three hours long, but I did not feel the length at all. The movie’s theme is money, so it made me reconsider my lifestyle of constantly chasing money. After that, I visited the bar Stiefel. When I came back home, my housemate was there, so I asked her, “Can I use the kitchen?” She said yes, but she also started using part of the kitchen. Is she okay? How many times does she have to cook and eat? I had canned baked herring and spaghetti for dinner. I cooked them in my room. I fell asleep around 10 pm.
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- The Great Movie I attended the Sunday mass in the morning. It was quite a cold day. Around 3 pm, I went to the movie theater and watched The Wolf of Wall Street. It was impressive movie for me. It was three hours long but I did not feel the long-duration. The movie's theme is MONEY so it made me reconsider my life style of purchasing the money day and night. After that, I visited the bar Stiefel. When I came back home, the share mate was there so I asked her "Can I use a kitchen?" and then she said yes but she also started using part of kitchn. Is she okay? How many time she did cooking and eating? I had canned baked harring and spaghetti (I cooked inside of my room) for dinner. I fell asleep sround 10 pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




