A Dull Day
I got out of my bed around 11am. I had nothing planned. My mom went out to participate in a competition of recitation of a Chinese poem, so only my dad stayed in the house. We do not have many talks these days. In the evening, I went to a bar, Nagomi, alone. I had a bottle of beer, edamame, and sauteed octopus. The bill came to less than 1000 yen. I moved to another bar. I thought, ” What am I doing?” I had beer and two skewers. I stopped by a store then got some discounted dishes. I ate them at home for dinner. When I returned to my home, my mom had already come back. I fell asleep after 10pm.
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- A Dull Day I got out my bed around 11am. I did not have any plans. My mom went out to participate a competition of recitation of a Chinese poem so only my dad stayed in the house. We do not have many talk these days. In the evening, I went to a bar, Nagomi alone. I had a bottle of beer, edamame, and sauteed octopus. The bill came less than 1000 yen. I moved to another bar. I thought what am I doing?I had beer and two skewers. I stopped by a store then got some discounted dishes. I ate them at home for main dinner. When I returned my home, my mom had already came back. I fell asleep after 10pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
