
A Busy Day
I went to a Dutch language class at 9 am. I was the earliest student to arrive. The teacher showed us an emergency blanket, and it was quite interesting. It was a fun class as usual, and I was happy. On my way to the supermarket, I met Chris. He said that he was going to see a psychiatrist and that his condition was stable, but I did not think he was okay. I withdrew cash for the rent. I decided to make bento art that day, so I bought some ingredients. I chose sandwiches as the main dish. In the evening, I paid the rent to Jan and went to the bar My Way. It was a nice time. I had bento for dinner and ate too much. I fell asleep around 10 pm.
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- An Active Day I went to a Dutch language class at 9 am. I was the eariest student to arrive there. The teacher showed us an emergency blanket. It was quite interesting. It was a fun class as usual. I was happy. When I was going to the supermarket, I met Chris. He said that he is going to a mental doctor and his condition is stable. I did not think he is okay. I withdew cash for rent. I decided to cook bento art this day and I bought some ingredients. I chose sandwich as the main dish. In the evening, I paid rent to Jan and I went out to go to the bar My Way. It was nice time. I had bento for dinner. I ate too much. I fell asleep around 10 pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




